Sunshine’s Whispers (Revised)



 
Woke up with the morning sign 
Saw on window the sunshine 

Red Sun tablet, in content 
Set to give the it's consent 

Calm Sun Ray touched the mind 
What is that? I’m sure to find!    

Notion came with the Sun rays 
Red is first in all the ways

“Shake n wake on active red, 
I want you to leave your bed” 

“I'll send you on time a beep, 
Listen, I won’t let you sleep” 

“Think of me n you wake up 
To work do your mind make up” 

“Keep you effort, Golden Rays, 
You have to work night’s n days” 

Felt sun ray conveys to me: 
“I ‘m busy like a bee” 

“I grow fruit, vegetables, 
I give all names, Labels” 

”No harm to good” that's Sunshine, 
”From The God have Line” 

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Submitted by sader_f on December 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG DD HH II AA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 759
Words 170
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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